Wednesday, March 16, 2011

process writing


            Well here we are, at the end of class. It seems to have rushed by in a flurry of good food, and better discussion. Over these weeks my writing style hasn’t changed much really. From the start to the end, I sit myself down, turn up some good music, and just dive right in. Ignoring outline, I tend to just get it all out at once, and then spend several more sessions bringing it up and looking it over.
            I encountered one major frustration, though this occurred purely when revising the first two papers. I agree fully that my passive voice needed to be revised and lessened, but I’ll be damned if that wasn’t the hardest thing to do out of all during this class. I rather dislike editing to begin with, and nothing quite hit that dislike like the slogging tedium of having to look over and revise entire sentences at a time. X-X Thankfully I only really had to put up with it twice, and the end results were well worth the time. On that note though, I did reach a minor breakthrough, that being my ability to describe seems to have improved a fair bit. I wasn’t able to use it as readily as I’d hoped for the restaurant review, but elsewhere I think it came out nicely. Lastly, thanks to great workshops with such a wonderful group of people, I was able to better understand some of the improvements my writing needs, such as the addition of more active tense, and better explanation and characterization.
            I can’t help but laugh a little at the thought of this next question. My method of deciding what to write about, what to make or do for each assignment, was purely chaotic in nature. If I wasn’t picking something randomly, someone else was picking for me. Truth be told, I don’t plan things out much, and I like that just fine. I always give myself a lot of time, so I can work right up to the last minute on stuff, but also so that I can let something just come to be. One way or another, inspiration always strikes.
            Almost all of the comments given on my pieces were helpful. And even those that weren’t, at least gave me an idea of what may need to be worked on. I found the comments on how to improve the content of my pieces to be the most helpful. However, more often then not, I found my own solutions to the issues or potential problems brought up in these comments. Each time, I used the comments to outline what needed to be worked on, and then found my own ways to go about solving, most of the time at least. I think this felt more natural to me, someone who doesn’t like a ridged or suggested structure to my reviewing and revisions.
            Out of all of this, I’m left with a few good self-discoveries. I found out a lot more about food then I think I ever wanted to, but in a good way. I’m glad to have this knowledge now, so I can make more informed decisions about what I choose to eat. Also, I’ve come to greater appreciation for the memory inducing quality of certain foods. The memoir and perfect meal assignment really brought that out in me. On a last note, this class was very fun, and is probably one of the most enjoyable writing classes I’ve ever had, Thank you all!
           

Smash Burger(Revised Review)


Smash Burger isn’t the sort of place you’d take your boss to dinner. It’s not the sort of place you’d want to take a first date, either. However, that's no reason not to go to Smash Burger. It is without a doubt the perfect kind of place to go catch some good food with a friend, or just pick up something quick but good. So long as you know what to expect going in, Smash Burger can be just the thing to satisfy that urge for a good burger.
         The restaurant is located along West Main, a little ways before the intersection with stadium. It is next to another unique restaurant known as the Hanger. Just keep your eyes out for the sign and big bold letters on the roof of the building; it’s pretty hard to miss. Interestingly enough, Smash Burger is actually a chain, and a decently successful one at that.
         Smash Burger is a surprisingly small for how lively a restaurant it can be. Upon entering, the customer is greeted by large block letters on the walls showing off the motto of the place: “Smash Sizzle Savor.” This describes the sort of meal that to be expected from Smash Burger: something simple, but certainly to be savored. The color scheme is red and white, with some rather lovely hanging lights and small, but comfortable and friendly booths. To order just walk up to the register and with the aid of the large menu hanging to the side order your meal.
         The food shouldn’t be written off as ordinary junky fast food like what can be found at Burger King. Smash Burger is more in the territory of places like Steak&Shake, serving good burgers. The main dish is a variety of burgers, some of which are quite unlike anything seen before, such as like a green olive burger. For those who are more inclined to have a more mundane burger, that, too, can easily be done, with all the usual toppings such as tomatoes or onions. Further choices for the customer include a make your own burger option, which offers a small variety of buns, and any and all of the toppings from other burgers, leading to some very outlandish combinations such as a cherry BBQ sweet relish ranch burger.
         Along with the variety burgers, chicken burgers or one of a variety of salads are also available. Both include some of the more mundane offerings that can be found elsewhere, at places like Steak&Shake, as well as several much more exotic and unique options such as the Cherry BBQ Ranch salad. This variety is one of Smash Burger’s strong points. It should also be noted that thankfully the grease is toned down a lot more than at many other restaurants, though this is definitely not what many would consider a “healthy” meal.
         Drinks run the gambit of various pops and milk shakes. Sides (called SmashSides!) offer an expansive variety from the classic French fries and small bowl of chili, to more adventurous treats such as sweet potato fries. One rather odd side you can get with your meal is a small basket of fried pickles. This side comes with a small dipping dish of buttermilk ranch dressing. With the appearance of a circular French fry, they taste exactly like you might think a fried pickle would, more or less a pickle, but with a fried batter coating. It’s a sour and crispy flavor, but definitely worth looking into if you’re feeling like getting something different then the same old French fries.
         The burgers themselves come served on what they call egg buns, large, circular white buns served together with whatever Smashside in a metal fry basket. Where many burgers such as those from places like Steak&Shake are intimidating, vertically large, Smash Burgers are more manageable, though quite wide. Not having to stretch your jaw to take a bite is a welcomed relief. All the toppings are very crisp and exploding with flavor, lacking that bland and limp quality that most freeze dried toppings used in other places have. The burger itself is thick, juicy and actually tastes like a burger, which is an unfortunately rare quality. One side note though, while the green olive burger provides a unique blend of flavors, it is like trying to eat a burger on a bed of marbles. Olives will get everywhere except in your mouth and you will make a mess.

         Most burgers run from $5-$6, with sides from $2-$4 each. Fountain drinks are $1.79, and milk shakes are $4. If you’re looking for a meal around $10-$15, Smash Burger is a splendid choice.
         Perhaps the only real crime that Smash Burger commits is mediocrity. Their burgers are good enough, especially for their price, and will fill you up. But at the end of the day, that’s all that Smash Burger has to offer. The variety of the menu keeps it from getting old, but in the end, Smash Burger really is just another burger joint. There are literally hundreds of burger joints out there, and Smash Burger really just doesn’t do quite enough to stand out from the crowd. It’s a good choice if you have that craving for a burger and want something better or more unique then McDonalds, but just don’t expect anything more than a good burger.

Sunday, March 13, 2011

Smash Burger (part 3)


So looking back now on the whole event, I think Smash Burger at least managed to meet my own personally expectations of it. It was by no means the best burgers I have ever had, but truly my expectations going in where simply that it would hopefully be better then other fast food places such as McDonalds. In this regard Smash Burger didn’t disappoint at all, in fact it was quite good. I found Smash Burger to be a better option in quality, taste (blessedly lacking grease) and general atmosphere then regular fast food places.
            Other then that, I really didn’t think too much else of Smash Burger. It was good for it’s burgers, but nothing much else really stood out about it. Perhaps this is the only bit of disappointment I have after eating there. With a name like Smash Burger, one expects it to be a lot livelier place then it is. In the end, it is really just an above average burger joint with an interesting name.
            Between class discussion of other reviews, and some deep thought of my own, my idea of an authentic experience has changed a fair bit. Smash Burger itself didn’t really change much, but having talked in class, I really came to the conclusion that Authentic anything, is much like beauty, it’s in the eye of the beholder. In less metaphorical terms, this means that what makes some Authentic or not rests entirely with the opinions of who you are asking. This rather suits me though, as I think a lot of things in life are simply a matter of perspective.
            On a last note, I would whole-heartedly suggest checking out Smash Burger sometime when you get the chance. It’s a fairly cheep (at least by my standards) burger place, and it’s got some rather unique options. I thoroughly enjoyed eating there, so I would definitely suggest it to any others who want to give it a try.

Tuesday, March 8, 2011

Smash Burger Review


(Written for Gazette or similar small city newspaper)
            Let me tell you right off the bat, Smash Burger isn’t the sort of place you’d take your boss to dinner. It’s not the sort of place you’d want to take a first date either. This isn’t, however, a reason not to go to Smash Burger. It is without a doubt the perfect kind of place to go catch some good food with a friend, or just pick up something quick but good. So long as you know what to expect going in, Smash Burger can be just the thing to satisfy that urge for a good burger.
            Smash Burger is a surprisingly small but pleasant restaurant. As soon as you enter, you’re greeted by large block letters on the walls showing off the motto of the place: “Smash Sizzle Savor”. This pretty well describes the sort of meal that you can expect from Smash Burger: something simple, but certainly to be savored. The color scheme is red and white, with some nice hanging lights and booths. To order just walk up to the register and with the aid of the large menu hanging to the side order your meal.
            The food is actually quite decent, and shouldn’t be written off as ordinary junky fast food. The main dish is a variety of burgers, some of which are quite interesting, like a mushroom-swiss or a green olive burger. For those who are more inclined to have a good, regular burger, that too can easily be done, with all the usual toppings such as tomatoes or onions. Further choices for the customer include a make your own burger option, with plenty of possibilities.
            Along with the variety burgers, you can get a chicken burger, or one of a variety of salads. Both include some standard offerings as well as several rather interesting options such as the Cherry BBQ Ranch salad. This variety is one of Smash Burger’s strong points. It should also be noted that thankfully the grease is toned down a lot more than at many other restaurants, though this is definitely not what many would consider a “healthy” meal.
            Drinks run the gambit of various pops and milk shakes. Sides (called SmashSides!) offer a fairly unusual variety from the classic French fries and small bowl of chili, to more unique things such as sweet potato fries. One rather odd, but interesting side you can get with your meal is a small basket of fried pickles. You read that correctly, fried pickles. This side comes with a small dipping dish of buttermilk ranch dressing. With the appearance of a circular French fry, they taste exactly like you might think a fried pickle would, more or less a pickle, but with a fried batter coating. It’s a rather unique flavor, but definitely worth looking into if you’re feeling adventurous.
                        The burgers themselves come served on lush, large buns, with your side all together in a metal fry basket. Where many burgers are intimidating, vertically large, Smash Burgers are more manageable, though quite wide. Not having to stretch your jaw to take a bite is a welcomed relief. All the toppings are fresh and flavorful, lacking that tasteless quality that most freeze dried toppings used in other places have. The burger itself is thick, juicy and actually tastes like a burger, which is an unfortunately rare quality. One side note though, while the green olive burger provides a unique blend of flavors, it is like trying to eat a burger on a bed of marbles. Olives will get everywhere except in your mouth and you will make a mess.
            Price-wise Smash Burger is not to bad. Most burgers run from $5-$6, with sides coming at $2-$4. Fountain drinks are $1.79, and milk shakes are $4. If you’re looking for a meal around $10-$15, Smash Burger is a splendid choice.
            Perhaps the only real crime that Smash Burger commits is mediocrity. Their burgers are good enough, especially for their price, and will fill you up. But at the end of the day, that’s all that Smash Burger can really offer us. The variety and uniqueness of the menu keeps it from getting old, but in the end, Smash Burger really is just another burger joint. There are literally hundreds of burger joints out there, and Smash Burger really just doesn’t do quite enough to stand out from the crowd. It’s a good choice if you have that craving for a burger and want something better or more unique then McDonalds, but just don’t expect anything more than a good burger.

Sunday, March 6, 2011

SMASH BURGER (pre review)


Well, this has become a rather interesting assignment in that it is not entirely under my control anymore. Since I’m quite literally sans any money at the moment, I’ve decided to go with the family out to eat, because they are close by, and willing to pay my way. However, because this is now a full family event, where we go is no longer exactly under my control or choice, despite assignment. And so, it seems we’re to head to a burger joint tonight, called simply Smash Burger.
            Now don’t get me wrong here, I’m quite grateful that my family is willing to help out with the assignment, and without them it really wouldn’t be possible. But a burger joint isn’t exactly a view into another culture, or anything much new ya know?
            Now on the upside, I did get them to pick somewhere none of us have ever been. Smash Burger, has rested along out west main near a restaurant known as the Hanger, for a while. I have admittedly been quite curious, as it’s quite hard to miss a name like that. In all honesty, I’m actually rather looking forward to this now.
            I am, and have always, loved burgers. I can’t, and won’t claim to be an expert on them, but I enjoy them quite often, and as such, I truly am rather eager to see if Smash Burger’s burgers are good. I’ve held back from looking anything up yet, I want to go in not knowing what to expect.
            Burger joints are often places of convenience, where you go in, get your food and get out, or eat in. But the food often suffers for this, as places like burger king and McDonalds can attest to. However, there is a place for the burger joint in the restaurant world beyond simple convenience. Places like Steak&Shake are still fast food places, but give a little more respect to the burgers they serve. The end result is food that actually tastes like a burger, something McDonalds has yet to achieve for me. So one of the big questions here will be, is this going to be purely a fast food place, or will Smash Burger be able to offer up more then just convenience?
            I will of course have to sample the burger and whatever else may be interesting on the menu. An upside to going with the family now, or at least my father and sister (my mom detests fast food), is that I will be able to get a wider view of the menu from what they decide to get. In the end, we’ll just have to see if Smash Burger lives up to my expectations of it, and that it won’t be just another fast food joint.

Thursday, March 3, 2011

the perfect meal, revised.


                                        The perfect meal
When it comes to the topic of the "perfect meal" everyone has an opinion, and that is perhaps what makes it both such an interesting and such a difficult topic. The perfect meal for one person might be unappealing and inedible to another. To one person, the perfect meal might not even be food dependent, but is be more affected by with whom and where it is eaten. Other people might feel that the food is the only part that matters. So when challenged to make my own perfect meal, my concern was not so much about making a perfect meal, but deciding in the first place what the hell I consider to be a perfect meal.
            It came down to two qualities. The first involved the food I would have to make, and in this regard it was easy enough to decide. The food would have to put forth a variety of flavors and at the same time be very satisfying. It would have to be first a meal that left you full and warm inside. Perhaps most important of all though, I would have to make it all myself. Secondly, as for the feel of the meal itself, and who I would eat it with, that took a little more thought. I grew up with a family that practiced a wonderful tradition: we ate together as a family. For me, there couldn’t be a lot of fuss and showiness.  It had to be a simple meal, with the family, in a casual manner.
            With this much decided, next up was the menu. I chose to ignore the synergy between foods. I am well aware that some foods go better with others; I just don’t particularly care about that myself. Food is food is food.  With this in mind, I picked four very different and very good foods to have together.
            The first choice was easy. Bread Machine bread. I grew up with the stuff, its seductive scent, and wonderful fluffy warmth. Now it would be my turn to make it. Speaking of childhood favorites, my mind quickly turned to broccoli with melted cheese. This mix had been a long-standing favorite of mine, and also was healthy! Halfway there, I needed now only a dessert and a meat. Picking which meat I would use for this meal was complicated. I’m a great lover of meat, and a self-proclaimed carnivore. Would it be tender pork chops, or simple and delicious chicken legs? There were far too many choices, so I decided to go in another direction: fish. With fish it’s much easier, since I really only like tuna and salmon, and salmon won out in the end. One more item: dessert. For the longest time I’ve enjoyed making dessert. Be it cookies or cake, it was one of the best parts of baking for me. When I found out we had a box of red velvet cake, I dropped the idea of making chocolate cake to try the red velvet, something I’d never made before.
The menu was set. I know many may now look at this menu and wonder, just what the hell I’m doing making salmon and broccoli, or bread and cake. They don’t seem like they’d fit, but to me, they all sound good, and that’s all that matters. But a bigger question now loomed before me.  It’s been a good while since I last cooked. Would I be able to make this meal?
            Once Friday came around, I rolled out of bed and got to work answering that rather scary question. It started early, as the bread machine bread takes a while to make the bread. Now I happen to be lucky, I live a mere mile and half away from the college I attend, so it took a single phone call home and I got a ride from my father. His warm smile and friendly words greeted me, and we chatted all the way home about classes, homework and just life in general. Arriving at home, I had a few hours before classes started up back at college, so I went about figuring out how to do this. For the longest time I’d considered the bread machine to be some big, complicated process. From what little I knew, making bread by hand was far from simple; and even with the aid of a machine, as in this case, I thought it would be rough. I couldn’t have been more wrong. Much to my delight and enjoyment, it became a simple task. My dad gently outlined for me that all that was needed was to put flour, yeast, water, salt, oil, and a few other things into the machine and then leave it to bake. I felt a touch of disappointment that it wasn’t as complex as I thought, but that was easily overcome by the calming simplicity of it. I liked that it wasn’t some large arduous task to make such good bread, but instead an act that merely required a few moments, the right ingredients, and the will to do it.
            Returning then to college, I went through classes, my mind back on the bread churning away in the machine, being baked to perfection. That had gone smoothly enough, but I was worried about the other three components. Broccoli can be touchy, and gross when over-cooked. Salmon burns easily, and I’d never attempted red velvet cake. I would soon confront all three. Needless to say, I was rather distracted that day in class, my mind on to many things.
Classes ended and I phoned home once more, ready to go see the verdict on my bread. Would it work? Did it somehow go wrong? A jittery nervousness descended on me, and then was banished upon returning home as I pulled a fresh, warm, fluffy loaf of bread from the bread machine. It was perfect. One part down, three to go.
            The cake came next. The mix required the usual suspects: eggs, water, and oil. I don’t use a set of beaters to mix batter; I do it by hand with a spoon. It takes longer, but just feels right. It’s while I’m mixing that I see something unusual. For those who haven’t had red velvet cake before, it’s called “red” velvet for a reason. I looked down and was stirring a mixture that was an unsettling blood red. Into the pan the batter went, and into the oven the pan went. Better to not ponder on just what it looked like at that point. It took an hour and half for the cake to bake properly, our oven is slowly dying, and lacks the energy it once had. What came out of the oven though was a fluffy, incredibly rich, dark red cake, which more than made up for its initial appearance.
            It was while the cake cooked that an odd feeling came over me. There was something very different about me being the chef now, being the one cooking for my family. I’d spent years growing up and being fed by my parents, now to be the one in the role of chef, felt a little odd. But despite that, it felt good to. I had a warm sense of pride, in that now it was my turn to provide for the family, and I hopped I would do it well.
            The salmon was easier, thankfully, and less disturbing then the cake.  My mom stepped in to help direct it, her words stern, but nice as she guides me through the act. I plopped the salmon down into the pan, lathered it with olive oil, broiled it for ten minutes, poked at it and cut it a bit, and then cooked it for another ten or so. It was by far the simplest part of the meal to make. Yet, as it was baking away in the oven, my thoughts turned back to all the meals I’d ever had at the college cafeteria.  Café meals often fill you up, and certainly don’t taste bad, but they are oddly unsatisfying in the end. There’s something missing, and I think it’s both a lack of quality, and a lack of pride for what you’re eating there. Where as already, this meal to me is something to be very proud of.
            The broccoli, on the other hand, was a bit more interesting. First, having washed and separated the pieces, I needed to cut and chop it into manageable bits. Being the adventurous soul that I am, I found the butcher’s cleaver and went to work. Despite the overkill of using that knife, it actually worked quite well, requiring only one or two quick chops. The cut broccoli was then tumbled down into the pan with some water, covered and left to cook. Timing here was essential my parents informed me, and at the critical moment, I pulled the pan from the heat. Now a rich, vibrant green, the broccoli was drained and put back into the pan, then mixed around with copious amounts of cheese and margarine. The meal was ready.
            Everyone was gathered then. just my parents and I, with my sister away at a cake decorating class.  She’s getting quite good at this art, and is able already to make beautiful flowers of icing. The meal certainly didn’t disappoint. The bread was incredibly fluffy on the inside, and crunchy/crumbly on the outside.  The salmon came out wonderfully, flavorful and soft, unburned in most places. Finally the broccoli mixed well with the cheese, making a tasty combination. Last comes the cake, which is beautiful both in color and taste now. Thick, incredibly rich, and with an indiscernible taste unlike anything i'd ever had before. it requires little with it. No meal from the café could ever compare to this one. And it occurs to me no one might have ever tried these four items together, because of the so-called synergy of food, and these people would be missing out. That is why I chose four drastically different things for this meal, because you never know until you try, just how well it might come out.
 Sitting back, very full, very satisfied, and very happy, I question myself. Is this what I wanted it to be? Was this meal indeed perfect? By the criteria I set it certainly was. Yet, more importantly for me, perhaps than any of the criteria, I’d made it myself. I found then, sitting and resting after this perfect meal, that what made it more than just a good meal was that I’d made it myself and shared it with my family. To top it all off to, my parents both loved it as well. That pride in having managed to cook an entire meal, with the instruction and help of my parents to be sure, but still, to have cooked it myself, was wonderful. Between that, and the wonderful feel of having successfully mixed four odd dishes together into one awesome meal, this was by far, the perfect meal.

Tuesday, March 1, 2011

Reviews response


         Well now, I’ve never read so many reviews all at once. Or ever really. I tend not to trust reviewers, not so much in that I doubt their opinions, as that my preferences are both odd and chaotic, so it’s rare that they’d like what I do. All the same, sometimes a review can give you a much-needed preview of a place, or just be fun and interesting to read. Sam Sifton does this quite well, in all of his pieces.
            Even when doing just a normal review, he uses a simple and clear style, that manages at once to not be cluttered while also giving us just enough detail that it feels like we’re actually there. He’s able to paint a clear picture of the atmosphere and what to expect of a place, and often manages to be funny while doing it. A mark of a good reviewer seems to be more then just managing to accurately review a restaurant but also managing to entertain while doing it.
            I greatly respect Sam Sifton’s honesty as well when he answered questions. He seemed to speak quite truly and gave good insights in his answers. I found it interesting that not only could he give advice on where to eat and what to get, but also was willing to speak some on matter of health and exercise as well.
            Sam Sifton has brought up a point that I like a lot. He follows a pattern of eating food and then exercising vigorously, only to eat again. This is surprisingly more or less what I do. Like Sam I do try and eat fairly healthy foods, but eating in the café it just isn’t possible all that often. So I exercise often, and go for long, winding mile walks daily. I think there is something to be said for this pattern to, because while it would be best to eat well and exercise, I think people tend to underestimate just how beneficial exercise can be.
            One thing I would have liked to see more of though, among these selections, would have been a few negative reviews. This is mostly for empirical reasons, as I want to see if there’s a certain way people write a review about a restaurant they don’t like. I’m caught wondering what I’d do really, if the place I chose to go to ends up a flop. Maybe we’ll go over this in class though, so here’s hopping so!
            Reading all these reviews though, has now made me a little nervous about eventually writing mine. I don’t often write in that sort of style, like Sam Sifton does. And while I know I can write it any way I want and it will probably turn out fairly well, I still am a little nervous now, about how I’ll pull it all together.